Unlucky Day Off Great job for a first flash!
I enjoyed this and loved the punch line. There are a bunch of little things you can fix to make it better (e.g. The tires spin the wrong way at the beginning), but solid job overall!
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enciel responds:
Thanks for the review! I didn't notice that part but I'll definitely keep these things in mind when I make a new one! :)
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